and we are falling

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so I'd like you all to read these lyrics and tell me if they're any good. :3


startsong/
I have done some things that I'm not all too proud of,
I can't seem to find the right way.

    all we are is but a dream within a dream. all we ever were is a song for us to sing


now four hundred miles from home I'm singing all alone
with only memories keeping me here.

    all we are is but a dream within a dream. all we ever were is a song for us to sing


here we are here tonight. you're glowing just so bright.
don't tell me you're sorry, cause I know that I'm not.

    all we are is but a dream within a dream. all we ever were is a song for us to sing


and we are falling.

and we
are
falling.

/endsong

so, what are we thinking? any criticisms? compliments? do keep in mind, it does fit perfectly with the music. XD

and (c) Elizabeth O'Brien, btw. >.>  [just a precaution XD]

well, I *might* do it for this talent show thing at my school camp coming up next week. this'll be awesome. XD

shanks much, and I hope you're all doing well. ^_^

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doofilein's avatar
it sounds good!! wanna hear it with music!!!!!!!!!!!