literature

don't hold your breath

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there isn't a day that
goes by, that i
regret
loving you.

    because on those days, you shined the brightest.

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It's like I've been here before; the same cool air I inhale in short, ragged breaths. The night sky looks like someone is waiting at the bottom of the horizon. It's all dark, hard for your eyes to adjust to, and for a moment I see the same thing you did.
--

    but that doesn't matter, because we'll never see the same thing again.
a collab with the amaaaaaaaazing ~JamJamKun, my best frienddddddd; go love his too. (: [link] ^^

so, i have terrible writers block, and he's not a writing enthusiast exactly [he totally should be], so we went for something easy; the stars at night. C:

critiques would be amazing.

thanks. :heart:
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Kari-AtH's avatar
This is wonderful, simply wonderful. I'd write a critique, but it wouldn't be fair. I have no words for this, and there's nothing that needs to be changed; it's that amazing. =)